Riot in heaven

By morning, calm returned the sky. Only then did I understand, heaven had come down in fury, and I had slept through its descent....

Tonight, a riot broke out in heaven.
First, it came as mighty air and flashes,
bruising the clouds like a ripped canvas.
The wind tore through ancient trees,
and thunder roared until the earth replied.
The clouds poured themselves out
angels weeping without restraint,
waters spilling freely upon the world.
Children laughed and soaked themselves
beneath the thrashing rain.
Above, thunder argued with lightning;
hail struck roofs like clenched fists.
Inside, I lay still, wrapped in rest,
the drum of rain upon my rooftop
lulling me into sleep.
By morning, calm returned the sky.
Only then did I understand,
heaven had come down in fury,
and I had slept through its descent.

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Olusegun Ajayi
12 days ago

“Inside I lay still, wrapped in rest.” Such level of peace and stillness, sounds like Jesus sleeping undisturbed in the boat during the Storm.

Beautiful poem.

Last edited 12 days ago by Olusegun Ajayi
Jesufemi Adesiyan
12 days ago

Wow… Posh Posh

Olawale Peace
12 days ago

This is beautifully written. The imagery is vivid.
Well-done man. 🎉

Last edited 12 days ago by Olawale Peace
Okafor Chinwendu
12 days ago

Your words turned the storm into something sacred and unsettling at the same time. Very powerful ending.

Olayode Timileyin
12 days ago

This is one of those poems you reread. Nice work.

Destar Freeman
12 days ago

Beautiful poem 🥳

Emmanuel Daniel
11 days ago

Amazing read, do you have some others?
your use of the language and the imagery is fantastic, let me say fantastica 😊

Odewale Tola Elizabeth
10 days ago

Great! You’ve done a wonderful job
Keep it up bro
The sky is just the beginning