i’m a potter–
whose clay yearns for
incessant twists and turns
that could transform sand castles
into skyscrapers.
so i shed old skins of impatience,
indiscipline as a snake discards
its tired skin,
& trim wild friendships… like a gardener
prunes overgrowth of floras.
my palms bear calluses engraved
by countless poems being paddled
in canoe of rejected works…
my heart enlarges from
wholesome boos on stage,
while my shy stomach bubbles like sea waves.
what journey defers arrival?
is this a time loop
i can’t leap out of?
in this jigsaw puzzle,
maybe i’ve got the cow
grazing on top of the tree.
with uncertainty, still i write. ’cause
setbacks are blessings-in-disguise.
I tell my ribcage to expand farther,
’cause this heart of mine
is about to grow even bigger.
i await success to strip
my garbages & place
upon my calloused palms,
victory on a gold platter.

Lovely
Thank you.
“i await success to strip my garbages & place upon my calloused palms”
That line spoke to me! Very insightful.
Thank you.
I’m glad it spoke to you.
Same here bro.
This guy is just too good with words.
Great piece Terngu.
Thank you, Manlykgabby.
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Beautiful words.
Thank you so much.
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Nice one
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Lovely piece, last part is just so beautiful!
Wow!
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I’m honoured.
This is beautiful
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This right her is a masterpiece.
Thank you, brotherly…
Awesome Chief.
No better way to metaphorically highlight the rigors involved in attaining success in life generally
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Word
Thank you…
“my palms bear calluses engraved
by countless poems being paddled
in canoe of rejected works”
Only a writer will understand the weight of this striking lines, very relatable and beautiful.
Well-done
You’re right.
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What a careful way to articulate words. The poem is so touchy and inspiring. Keep it up
Thank you, sir.
I’m afraid you love it…
setbacks are blessings-in-disguise.
D poetic doctor don give me another motivational quote
Hahaha!
Thank you so much.
I’m glad you are inspired.
Terngu🔥🔥🔥💥….Nice one
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Cheers to the New YOU
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So beautiful, I can relate to it so much 💜
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Great piece.
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Woww…
This is beautiful
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What a privilege to read such astonishing piece of writing!
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Setbacks are blessings in disguise 💯
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I’m glad you love that line 😀
Amazing bro💯
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Amazing Piece my bro
Thank you
Nice piece, are journey of success.
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This is really good
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I’m glad you love it…