This Jigsaw Puzzle

in this jigsaw puzzle, maybe i've got the cow grazing on top of the tree. ...with uncertainty, still i write....

i’m a potter–
whose clay yearns for
incessant twists and turns
that could transform sand castles
into skyscrapers.

so i shed old skins of impatience,
indiscipline as a snake discards
its tired skin,
& trim wild friendships… like a gardener
prunes overgrowth of floras.

my palms bear calluses engraved
by countless poems being paddled
in canoe of rejected works…
my heart enlarges from
wholesome boos on stage,
while my shy stomach bubbles like sea waves.

what journey defers arrival?
is this a time loop
i can’t leap out of?
in this jigsaw puzzle,
maybe i’ve got the cow
grazing on top of the tree.

with uncertainty, still i write. ’cause
setbacks are blessings-in-disguise.
I tell my ribcage to expand farther,
’cause this heart of mine
is about to grow even bigger.

i await success to strip
my garbages & place
upon my calloused palms,
victory on a gold platter.

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Esther
13 hours ago

Lovely

Terngu Japhet Nyior
13 hours ago
Reply to  Esther

Thank you.

Danny Blacq
12 hours ago

“i await success to strip my garbages & place upon my calloused palms”

That line spoke to me! Very insightful.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
12 hours ago
Reply to  Danny Blacq

Thank you.
I’m glad it spoke to you.

Manlykgabby
12 hours ago
Reply to  Danny Blacq

Same here bro.
This guy is just too good with words.

Manlykgabby
12 hours ago

Great piece Terngu.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
12 hours ago
Reply to  Manlykgabby

Thank you, Manlykgabby.
I’m glad you love it.

Eunice
12 hours ago

Beautiful words.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
12 hours ago
Reply to  Eunice

Thank you so much.
I’m glad you love it.

Christiana Agada
11 hours ago

Nice one

Terngu Japhet Nyior
11 hours ago

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it

cr33d
11 hours ago

Lovely piece, last part is just so beautiful!

Terngu Japhet Nyior
11 hours ago
Reply to  cr33d

Wow!
Thank you.
I’m honoured.

Anita Paul-Aje
11 hours ago

This is beautiful

Terngu Japhet Nyior
11 hours ago
Reply to  Anita Paul-Aje

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

N Terdoo
11 hours ago

This right her is a masterpiece.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
11 hours ago
Reply to  N Terdoo

Thank you, brotherly…

Tizhe
10 hours ago

Awesome Chief.
No better way to metaphorically highlight the rigors involved in attaining success in life generally

Terngu Japhet Nyior
10 hours ago
Reply to  Tizhe

Thank you, Boss.
I’m glad you love it.

Joel
10 hours ago

Word

Terngu Japhet Nyior
10 hours ago
Reply to  Joel

Thank you…

Olusegun Ajayi
9 hours ago

“my palms bear calluses engraved
by countless poems being paddled
in canoe of rejected works”

Only a writer will understand the weight of this striking lines, very relatable and beautiful.

Well-done

Terngu Japhet Nyior
9 hours ago
Reply to  Olusegun Ajayi

You’re right.
Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Azenda Hemen Frederick
9 hours ago

What a careful way to articulate words. The poem is so touchy and inspiring. Keep it up

Terngu Japhet Nyior
9 hours ago

Thank you, sir.
I’m afraid you love it…

Itz Abdul
9 hours ago

setbacks are blessings-in-disguise.
D poetic doctor don give me another motivational quote

Terngu Japhet Nyior
8 hours ago
Reply to  Itz Abdul

Hahaha!
Thank you so much.
I’m glad you are inspired.

Creed
8 hours ago

Terngu🔥🔥🔥💥….Nice one

Terngu Japhet Nyior
8 hours ago
Reply to  Creed

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Salisu
6 hours ago

Cheers to the New YOU

Terngu Japhet Nyior
6 hours ago
Reply to  Salisu

Thank you.

Edoh Ehi
6 hours ago

So beautiful, I can relate to it so much 💜

Terngu Japhet Nyior
6 hours ago
Reply to  Edoh Ehi

Thank you.
I’m glad you could relate to it.

Olajumoke
6 hours ago

Great piece.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
6 hours ago
Reply to  Olajumoke

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Emmanuel Edache
6 hours ago

Woww…
This is beautiful

Terngu Japhet Nyior
5 hours ago

Thank you.

Simon
6 hours ago

What a privilege to read such astonishing piece of writing!

Terngu Japhet Nyior
5 hours ago
Reply to  Simon

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it.

Precious Alfred
5 hours ago

Setbacks are blessings in disguise 💯

Terngu Japhet Nyior
5 hours ago

Thank you.
I’m glad you love that line 😀

Agaba Ogwuche
2 hours ago

Amazing bro💯

Terngu Japhet Nyior
2 hours ago
Reply to  Agaba Ogwuche

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Agaba
2 hours ago

Amazing Piece my bro

Terngu Japhet Nyior
49 minutes ago
Reply to  Agaba

Thank you

Joshua
1 hour ago

Nice piece, are journey of success.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
49 minutes ago
Reply to  Joshua

Thank you

Radjer
1 hour ago

This is really good

Terngu Japhet Nyior
48 minutes ago
Reply to  Radjer

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…