This Jigsaw Puzzle

in this jigsaw puzzle, maybe i've got the cow grazing on top of the tree. ...with uncertainty, still i write....

i’m a potter–
whose clay yearns for
incessant twists and turns
that could transform sand castles
into skyscrapers.

so i shed old skins of impatience,
indiscipline as a snake discards
its tired skin,
& trim wild friendships… like a gardener
prunes overgrowth of floras.

my palms bear calluses engraved
by countless poems being paddled
in canoe of rejected works…
my heart enlarges from
wholesome boos on stage,
while my shy stomach bubbles like sea waves.

what journey defers arrival?
is this a time loop
i can’t leap out of?
in this jigsaw puzzle,
maybe i’ve got the cow
grazing on top of the tree.

with uncertainty, still i write. ’cause
setbacks are blessings-in-disguise.
I tell my ribcage to expand farther,
’cause this heart of mine
is about to grow even bigger.

i await success to strip
my garbages & place
upon my calloused palms,
victory on a gold platter.

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Esther
1 month ago

Lovely

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Esther

Thank you.

Danny Blacq
1 month ago

“i await success to strip my garbages & place upon my calloused palms”

That line spoke to me! Very insightful.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Danny Blacq

Thank you.
I’m glad it spoke to you.

Manlykgabby
1 month ago
Reply to  Danny Blacq

Same here bro.
This guy is just too good with words.

Manlykgabby
1 month ago

Great piece Terngu.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Manlykgabby

Thank you, Manlykgabby.
I’m glad you love it.

Eunice
1 month ago

Beautiful words.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Eunice

Thank you so much.
I’m glad you love it.

Christiana Agada
1 month ago

Nice one

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it

cr33d
1 month ago

Lovely piece, last part is just so beautiful!

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  cr33d

Wow!
Thank you.
I’m honoured.

Anita Paul-Aje
1 month ago

This is beautiful

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Anita Paul-Aje

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

N Terdoo
1 month ago

This right her is a masterpiece.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  N Terdoo

Thank you, brotherly…

Tizhe
1 month ago

Awesome Chief.
No better way to metaphorically highlight the rigors involved in attaining success in life generally

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Tizhe

Thank you, Boss.
I’m glad you love it.

Joel
1 month ago

Word

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Joel

Thank you…

Olusegun Ajayi
1 month ago

“my palms bear calluses engraved
by countless poems being paddled
in canoe of rejected works”

Only a writer will understand the weight of this striking lines, very relatable and beautiful.

Well-done

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Olusegun Ajayi

You’re right.
Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Azenda Hemen Frederick
1 month ago

What a careful way to articulate words. The poem is so touchy and inspiring. Keep it up

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago

Thank you, sir.
I’m afraid you love it…

Itz Abdul
1 month ago

setbacks are blessings-in-disguise.
D poetic doctor don give me another motivational quote

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Itz Abdul

Hahaha!
Thank you so much.
I’m glad you are inspired.

Creed
1 month ago

Terngu🔥🔥🔥💥….Nice one

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Creed

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Salisu
1 month ago

Cheers to the New YOU

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Salisu

Thank you.

Edoh Ehi
1 month ago

So beautiful, I can relate to it so much 💜

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Edoh Ehi

Thank you.
I’m glad you could relate to it.

Olajumoke
1 month ago

Great piece.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Olajumoke

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Emmanuel Edache
1 month ago

Woww…
This is beautiful

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago

Thank you.

Simon
1 month ago

What a privilege to read such astonishing piece of writing!

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Simon

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it.

Precious Alfred
1 month ago

Setbacks are blessings in disguise 💯

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago

Thank you.
I’m glad you love that line 😀

Agaba Ogwuche
1 month ago

Amazing bro💯

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Agaba Ogwuche

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Agaba
1 month ago

Amazing Piece my bro

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Agaba

Thank you

Joshua
1 month ago

Nice piece, are journey of success.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Joshua

Thank you

Radjer
1 month ago

This is really good

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Radjer

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

Joseph
1 month ago

This is top notch 💯

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Joseph

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it…

OCHOYAMA
1 month ago

Wonderful one I must say

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  OCHOYAMA

Thank you.

Oluwatobi Ojo
1 month ago

This is a brilliant piece.
Welldone. 👏

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Oluwatobi Ojo

Thank you.

@Terngu
1 month ago

BRAVO!!!
BRO YOU ARE A RARE TALENT.
THAT PIECE IS AWSOME.

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  @Terngu

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it.

AnneIyefuU
1 month ago

🔥

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  AnneIyefuU

Thank you

Smart favou
1 month ago

Really inspiring

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Smart favou

Thanks man

Chibuike
1 month ago

This is a very beautiful poem. Very relatable

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Chibuike

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it

Rida
1 month ago

Short, soulful, relatable.🔥
Well done 😊💝✨

Terngu Japhet Nyior
1 month ago
Reply to  Rida

Thank you.
I’m glad you love it.